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<p class=MsoNormal style='margin-left:.25in'><font size=3 face=Cambria><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>I went through the current document
and have the following comments.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><font size=3 face=Cambria><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>In the second paragraph of
the “Scope” section, it states the “No provisions are
included to specify roll paper sizes.” However, …<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
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<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1'><font size=3
face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>…
in the Section 3. Media Type, there are four roll types and one undetermined
length for “screen”. <o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l0 level2 lfo1'><font size=3
face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>… in
section 5.1.3 it states “… for roll-fed media, the long-dim
is always 0.”<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'>This should be resolved.<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><font size=3 face=Cambria><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>Again, Hagaki is not a media
type. If someone really believes this is a “media type”
then it should be added as a vendor extension.<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><font size=3 face=Cambria><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>Clarification of the word “sources”
in the Abstract. When I first read it, I thought it meant “media
source”; however, I now believe it means “reference source”.
I would suggest dropping the word “sources” in the abstract.<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><font size=3 face=Cambria><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>On Page 17, there are two
entries for na_10x15_10x15in<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><font size=3 face=Cambria><span
style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Cambria'>On page 18, should
iso_a4x4_297x841mm be included?<o:p></o:p></span></font></li>
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<p class=MsoNormal><font size=3 face=Cambria><span style='font-size:12.0pt;
font-family:Cambria'>Glen<o:p></o:p></span></font></p>
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