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Hi,<br><br>Thanks Paul - copying to IPP list for archive.<br><br>All - I had to rewrite the Transport Binding sequences pretty heavily<br>to make them more accurate and reference section numbers/names<br>in the normative well-known protocols. Please proof closely.<br>
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Subject: Found Typo in ipps-uri-scheme-04-20111122<br>To: Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>><br>Cc: <a href="mailto:msweet@apple.com">msweet@apple.com</a><br><br><br>
<div link="blue" vlink="purple" lang="EN-US"><div><p class="MsoNormal">Hi Ira,<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-04-20111122.pdf" target="_blank">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-04-20111122.pdf</a><u></u><u></u></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">I found on lines 250 and 306 that the word “to” is missing. The current text states “<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:"Courier New"">connection the target endpoint</span>” and it should read “<span style="font-size:105pt;font-family:"Courier New"">connection to the target endpoint</span>”.<u></u><u></u></p>
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