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Hi,<br><br>For our review of &#39;ipps&#39; URI scheme at todays IPP F2F session.<br><br>Cheers,<br>- Ira<br><br clear="all">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>
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<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Ira McDonald</b> <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>&gt;</span><br>
Date: Sun, Nov 27, 2011 at 12:48 PM<br>Subject: Fwd: Found Typo in ipps-uri-scheme-04-20111122<br>To: <a href="mailto:ipp@pwg.org">ipp@pwg.org</a><br><br><br>Hi,<br><br>Thanks Paul - copying to IPP list for archive.<br><br>
All - I had to rewrite the Transport Binding sequences pretty heavily<br>to make them more accurate and reference section numbers/names<br>in the normative well-known protocols.  Please proof closely.<br>
<br>Cheers,<br>- Ira<br><br clear="all">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP WG<br>Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG<br>

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<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">---------- Forwarded message ----------<br>From: <b class="gmail_sendername">Paul Tykodi</b> <span dir="ltr">&lt;<a href="mailto:ptykodi@tykodi.com" target="_blank">ptykodi@tykodi.com</a>&gt;</span><br>
Date: Sun, Nov 27, 2011 at 6:16 AM<br>
Subject: Found Typo in ipps-uri-scheme-04-20111122<br>To: Ira McDonald &lt;<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br>Cc: <a href="mailto:msweet@apple.com" target="_blank">msweet@apple.com</a><br>
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<div link="blue" vlink="purple" lang="EN-US"><div><p class="MsoNormal">Hi Ira,<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-04-20111122.pdf" target="_blank">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-04-20111122.pdf</a><u></u><u></u></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">I found on lines 250 and 306 that the word “to” is missing. The current text states “<span style="font-size:10.5pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">connection the target endpoint</span>” and it should read “<span style="font-size:105pt;font-family:&quot;Courier New&quot;">connection to the target endpoint</span>”.<u></u><u></u></p>

<p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">Best Regards,<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">/Paul<u></u><u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal"><u></u> <u></u></p><p class="MsoNormal">

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