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Hi Mike,<br><br>Inline thoughts below.<br><br>Cheers,<br>- Ira<br><br clear="all"><br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Sun, Sep 23, 2012 at 12:34 AM, Michael Sweet <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:msweet@apple.com" target="_blank">msweet@apple.com</a>></span> wrote:<br>
<blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word"><div>Some feedback/questions about the feedback from the last IPP WG concall:</div><div>
<br></div>GP28: Section 3.2.2: The Client queries the printer, not the User. – The term User can refer to both a person or to Automata. We need to select a different term to refer to actions only undertaken by people (not Automata) in the use cases.<br>
<br>GP30: Section 3.2.2.x: "Jane" instead of "User"? – Same issue to be resolved as item GP 28.<br><br>GP39: Section <a href="http://3.2.2.4" target="_blank"><font color="red"><b>MailScanner warning: numerical links are often malicious:</b></font> 3.2.2.4</a>: "provides a preview" instead of "displays a preview"<br>
<br>REJECTED: We're talking about the user interface, not the implementation details. –<br><br>Because we are talking about a user interface for people, we need to resolve the same issue as GP28 and GP30.<br><br><span style="white-space:pre-wrap"> </span>I would prefer to drop "automata" from the User definition; the alternative is to<div>
start using Person (and Person Interface?) which is just awkward.</div><div><br></div></div></blockquote><div><ira> I agree w/ Bill - simply using a proper name throughout (Jane, Bob, etc.)<br>would be more readable in these informal use cases (section 3).<br>
<br>I also think we should make clear that "User" is normally NOT automata in <br>the use cases (and the definition). In TCG terms, User is an Authenticated<br>Entity (and so are automata).<br>
</ira> <br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word"><div></div><div><br></div><div><div>GP70: Section <a href="http://4.2.3.1" target="_blank"><font color="red"><b>MailScanner warning: numerical links are often malicious:</b></font> 4.2.3.1</a>: Expand "air" to "auth-info-required (air)" – air is a word with a standard definition. Where we are using the term as an abbreviation, the use of “air” in this entry needs further clarification.<br>
<br><span style="white-space:pre-wrap"> </span>"air" is never used as an abbreviation, and I am inclined to remove the whole</div><div><span style="white-space:pre-wrap"> </span>historical reference to CUPS since it is just confusing people more than "why is</div>
<div><span style="white-space:pre-wrap"> </span>it called "air"...</div><div><br></div><div><br>GP95: Section 6.1: Change "Figures 2 through 5" to "Figures 2 through Figure 5"? – change to read "Figure 2 through Figure 5"</div>
<div><br></div><div><span style="white-space:pre-wrap"> </span>My Chicago Manual of Style is still in a box somewhere, and the only online reference</div><div><span style="white-space:pre-wrap"> </span>I've found for this is the American Psychology Society's style manual which says to</div>
<div><span style="white-space:pre-wrap"> </span>use "Figures 2-5".</div><div><br></div></div></div></blockquote><div><ira><br>Ah but in chapter-figure numbering "Figure 2-5" could<br>be a reference. For reasons of clarity, my wife Nancy <br>
(the editor) prefers the original "Figures 2 through 5".<br></ira> <br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word">
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