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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=windows-1252"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; "><div>Some feedback/questions about the feedback from the last IPP WG concall:</div><div><br></div>GP28: Section 3.2.2: The Client queries the printer, not the User. – The term User can refer to both a person or to Automata. We need to select a different term to refer to actions only undertaken by people (not Automata) in the use cases.<br><br>GP30: Section 3.2.2.x: "Jane" instead of "User"? – Same issue to be resolved as item GP 28.<br><br>GP39: Section 3.2.2.4: "provides a preview" instead of "displays a preview"<br><br>REJECTED: We're talking about the user interface, not the implementation details. –<br><br>Because we are talking about a user interface for people, we need to resolve the same issue as GP28 and GP30.<br><br><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>I would prefer to drop "automata" from the User definition; the alternative is to<div> start using Person (and Person Interface?) which is just awkward.</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div>GP70: Section 4.2.3.1: Expand "air" to "auth-info-required (air)" – air is a word with a standard definition. Where we are using the term as an abbreviation, the use of “air” in this entry needs further clarification.<br><br><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>"air" is never used as an abbreviation, and I am inclined to remove the whole</div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>historical reference to CUPS since it is just confusing people more than "why is</div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>it called "air"...</div><div><br></div><div><br>GP95: Section 6.1: Change "Figures 2 through 5" to "Figures 2 through Figure 5"? – change to read "Figure 2 through Figure 5"</div><div><br></div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>My Chicago Manual of Style is still in a box somewhere, and the only online reference</div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>I've found for this is the American Psychology Society's style manual which says to</div><div><span class="Apple-tab-span" style="white-space:pre"> </span>use "Figures 2-5".</div><div><br></div><div><div>
<span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; font-family: Helvetica; border-spacing: 0px; "><div>__________________________________________________</div><div>Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair<br></div></span>
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