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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space;">Additional comments after review of the latest SM 2.0 document:<div><br></div><div>Section 7.1.1: Add the following paragraph:</div><div><br></div><div> "Note: The Semantic Model defines a single InputSource element, which does not capture all of the necessary input intent. IPP FaxOut instead maps elements from the CopyInTicket group to do so." [I wanted to add something about SM 2.0 adopting this approach, but we usually avoid prognostication in our specs...]</div><div><br></div><div>Section 7.3: Add input-attributes-actual (1setOf collection), with reference to 7.1.1 for the member attributes. This provides a receipt of hardcopy input-attributes values. CONDITIONALLY REQUIRED for printers with scan capabilities.</div><div><br></div><div>Section 7: Add new 7.x Document Description Attributes, 7.x.1 with input-attributes-actual (collection), with reference to 7.1.1 for the member attributes. This provides a per-document receipt of hardcopy input-attributes values. CONDITIONALLY REQUIRED for printers with scan capabilities and support for the document object.</div><div><br></div><div>Section 9.2: Add input-attributes-actual job description attribute to list for scan-capable printers, add a new scan + document object paragraph for input-attributes-actual document description attribute.</div><div><br></div><div>Section 12.1: Add input-attributes-actual job description and document description attributes.</div><div><br></div><div>Section 13.1: Add reference to 5100.5 (document object) and 5108.04 (copy service)</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div><div>On Jun 27, 2013, at 8:12 AM, Michael Sweet <<a href="mailto:msweet@apple.com">msweet@apple.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><blockquote type="cite"><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html charset=us-ascii"><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">Follow-up comments based on the feedback we have gotten so far:<div><br></div><div>Section 8.2 does not mention that the 'fax-modem-xxx' keywords are defined in PWG 5107.3.</div><div><br></div><div><div>Section 8.2 does not define the equivalent of the 'connecting-to-defice' value from "printer-state-reasons". Should we define <span style="font-family: monospace; ">keyword(s) to describe this and/or the following intermediate states:</span><span style="font-family: monospace; "> Dialing, </span><span style="font-family: monospace; ">Answered, Training, and Connected?</span></div><div><br></div></div><div>Section 12.2 should not re-register PWG 5107.3 keyword values for "job-state-reasons".</div><div><br></div><div>Section 13.1 is missing a reference to PWG 5107.3.</div><div><br></div><div>_________________________________________________________</div><div><div apple-content-edited="true"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; border-spacing: 0px;"><span class="Apple-style-span" style="border-collapse: separate; font-family: 'Andale Mono'; font-style: normal; font-variant: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; line-height: normal; orphans: 2; text-align: -webkit-auto; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; widows: 2; word-spacing: 0px; border-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-decorations-in-effect: none; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px;"><div style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; -webkit-line-break: after-white-space; ">Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer, PWG Chair</div></span></span>
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