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<div dir="ltr"><div><div><div><div>Hi Smith,<br><br></div>At least in IETF and ISO documents the "Changes Since" section is<br></div>an appendix with a forward reference from section 1 Intro.<br><br></div>Cheers,<br></div>- Ira<br><br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG<br>Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br>IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br>Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br><a style="color:rgb(51,51,255)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</a><br><a style="color:rgb(102,0,204)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</a><br>mailto: <a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br>Jan-April: 579 Park Place Saline, MI 48176 734-944-0094<br>May-Dec: PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434<br><br><div style="display:inline"></div><div style="display:inline"></div><div style="display:inline"></div><div></div><div></div><div></div><div></div></div></div></div></div></div>
<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Nov 9, 2016 at 11:45 AM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless Architect) <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:smith.kennedy@hp.com" target="_blank">smith.kennedy@hp.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div style="word-wrap:break-word">I think that is a good idea as well. I'll add that and post a new release here in a few minutes. But should it be that late in the document? Wouldn't it be better if it was inserted in between the current section 3 "Requirements" and section 4 "Overview of Finishing", or the current section 4 "Overview of Finishing" and section 5 "Job Template Attributes"?<div><span class="HOEnZb"><font color="#888888"><br><div>
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<br><div><blockquote type="cite"><div>On Nov 9, 2016, at 7:57 AM, Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="m_4327130313488479220Apple-interchange-newline"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div><div><div><div>Hi Mike,<br><br></div>I like your suggestion and agree with your initial suggested content.<br><br></div>These "Changes Since" sections are important for new readers and<br></div>those who've "been away for awhile."<br><br></div>Cheers,<br></div>- Ira<br><br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div class="m_4327130313488479220gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG<br>Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br>IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br>Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br><a style="color:rgb(51,51,255)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/<wbr>blueroofmusic</a><br><a style="color:rgb(102,0,204)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/<wbr>highnorthinc</a><br>mailto: <a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br>Jan-April: 579 Park Place Saline, MI 48176 <a href="tel:734-944-0094" value="+17349440094" target="_blank">734-944-0094</a><br>May-Dec: PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 <a href="tel:906-494-2434" value="+19064942434" target="_blank">906-494-2434</a><br><br><div style="display:inline"></div><div style="display:inline"></div><div style="display:inline"></div><div></div><div></div><div></div><div></div></div></div></div></div></div>
<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Wed, Nov 9, 2016 at 8:29 AM, Michael Sweet <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:msweet@apple.com" target="_blank">msweet@apple.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">All,<br>
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It occurs to me, after looking at the current stable draft of IPP Finishings 2.1, that we don't have a high-level "Changes" section detailing the changes between published versions of PWG 5100.1 like we do for RFC2910bis and RFC2911bis, and that such a section would help our discussions at the F2F as well as providing useful context for readers once the update is published.<br>
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Proposed content:<br>
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11. Overview of Changes<br>
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11.1 Changes in IPP Finishings v2.1<br>
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The following changes were made for IPP Finishings v2.1:<br>
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- Added finishing enums and templates for multiple-hole punching and an engineering Z fold.<br>
- Defined an extension naming convention for the "finishing-template" member attribute.<br>
- Added the "media-sheets-supported" member attribute for the "finishings-col-database" and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.<br>
- Added the "stitching-method" member attribute for the "finishings-col", "finishings-col-database", and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.<br>
- Added the "printer-finisher-supplies" and "printer-finisher-supplies-des<wbr>cription" attributes.<br>
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11.2 Changes in IPP Finishings v2.0<br>
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The following changes were made for IPP Finishings v2.0:<br>
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- Moved definition of PWG 5100.3 "finishings-col" attribute to this document and added new member attributes for all finishings processes.<br>
- Added finishing enums and templates for coating, lamination, triple stapling, different kinds of punching, and common folds.<br>
- Added the "finishings-col-database" and "job-pages-per-set" attributes.<br>
- Added the "media-size" and "media-size-name" member attributes for the "finishings-col-database" and "finishings-col-ready" attributes.<br>
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