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<div dir="ltr"><div><div><div>Hi Smith,<br><br></div>Please treat as conventional WG last call feedback and hold the changes for end of last call version.<br><br></div>Cheers,<br></div>- Ira<br><br></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br clear="all"><div><div class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br>Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG<br>Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br>IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br>Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br><a style="color:rgb(51,51,255)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</a><br><a style="color:rgb(102,0,204)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</a><br>mailto: <a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br>Jan-April: 579 Park Place  Saline, MI  48176  734-944-0094<br>May-Dec: PO Box 221  Grand Marais, MI 49839  906-494-2434<br><br><div style="display:inline"></div><div style="display:inline"></div><div style="display:inline"></div><div></div><div></div><div></div><div></div></div></div></div></div></div>
<br><div class="gmail_quote">On Fri, Nov 17, 2017 at 10:02 AM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless  & Standards Architec) <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:smith.kennedy@hp.com" target="_blank">smith.kennedy@hp.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex">



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Wow, I wonder how I missed that too! I can hammer out another revision and we can re-issue the last call. Or we can just treat this as conventional last call feedback. Which do you and the IPP WG prefer?<br>
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<div><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">   Smith Kennedy<br>
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<div><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">   Wireless Architect - Client Software - IPG-PPS<br>
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<div><span style="background-color:rgba(255,255,255,0)">   Chair, IEEE ISTO Printer Working Group<br>
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On Nov 17, 2017, at 6:34 AM, Michael Sweet <<a href="mailto:msweet@apple.com" target="_blank">msweet@apple.com</a>> wrote:<br>
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<div><span>One Apple comment: there is no IANA Considerations section! (and I don't believe I missed this with all of the reviews we did!)</span><br>
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<span>You'll need two subsections to register the new operation and its corresponding value, to insert before the current section 8 (references) - the current reg-template.docx has the necessary text you can copy from:</span><br>
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<span>N IANA Considerations</span><br>
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<span>N.1 Type2 enum Registrations</span><br>
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<span>The attributes defined in this registration will be published by IANA according to the procedures in IPP Model and Semantics [RFC8011] section 7.1 in the following file:</span><br>
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<span>   <a href="http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipp-registrations" target="_blank">http://www.iana.org/<wbr>assignments/ipp-registrations</a></span><br>
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<span>The registry entries will contain the following information:</span><br>
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<span>   Attributes (attribute syntax)</span><br>
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<span>   operations-supported (1setOf type2 enum)                 [RFC8011]</span><br>
<span>     0x0066          Get-User-Printer-<wbr>Attributes            [IPPGUPA]</span><br>
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<span>N.2 Operation Registrations</span><br>
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<span>The attributes defined in this registration will be published by IANA according to the procedures in IPP/1.1 Model and Semantics [RFC8011] section 7.4 in the following file:</span><br>
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<span>   <a href="http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipp-registrations" target="_blank">http://www.iana.org/<wbr>assignments/ipp-registrations</a></span><br>
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<span>The registry entries will contain the following information:</span><br>
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<span>   Get-User-Printer-Attributes                              [<wbr>IPPGUPA]</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>On Nov 16, 2017, at 10:25 PM, Michael Sweet <<a href="mailto:msweet@apple.com" target="_blank">msweet@apple.com</a>> wrote:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>All,</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>This message begins the IPP Last Call of the IPP Get-User-Printer-Attributes registration which is available at the following URLs:</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  <a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippgupa-20171117.pdf" target="_blank">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/<wbr>ipp/wd/wd-ippgupa-20171117.pdf</a></span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>  <a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippgupa-20171117.odt" target="_blank">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/<wbr>ipp/wd/wd-ippgupa-20171117.odt</a></span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Please review this registration and respond to the IPP mailing list (reply-all to this message is fine) with any feedback you have for the proposed registration.</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>This IPP Last Call ends at 10pm PT on December 1, 2017.</span><br>
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<blockquote type="cite"><span>Michael Sweet, Senior Printing System Engineer</span><br>
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