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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">Thanks Alan! This editorial feedback is important, and I'll make this change before we go to Formal Vote. As an alternative, I could replace the "and" with a period, and make the second half of the (pretty long) sentence a new sentence, like so:<div class=""><br class=""></div><blockquote style="margin: 0 0 0 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;" class=""><div class="">The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method uses X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. X.509 certificate authentication via TLS<font color="#ff2600" class="">. This</font> <font color="#ff2600" class="">authentication method</font> is initiated by the Printer by sending a Certificate Request message during the Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246] handshake.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div></blockquote><div class="">Any strong opinions either way? I'm also not sure that I should be capitalizing "Authentication" in "The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method...".</div><div class=""><br class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Feb 26, 2019, at 6:01 AM, Sukert, Alan <<a href="mailto:alan.sukert@xerox.com" class="">alan.sukert@xerox.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><font face="Calibri" size="2" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;" class=""><span style="font-size: 11pt;" class=""><div class="">Minor comment (grammatically sentence did not read correctly; suggested addition is in red type) that can be ignored if needed to approve - Lines 272-274: The 'certificate' IPP Authentication method uses X.509 certificate authentication via TLS. X.509 certificate authentication via TLS<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><font color="red" class="">and</font><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>is initiated by the Printer by sending a Certificate Request message during the Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC5246] handshake.</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">Alan Sukert</div><div class="">Product Security Specialist</div><div class="">Xerox Research and Product Development/ Product Security and Development Process Controls</div><div class="">Xerox Certified Green Belt</div><div class=""><a href="mailto:Alan.Sukert@xerox.com" class="">Alan.Sukert@xerox.com</a>| tel 585.427.1413</div><div class="">MS 0111-03A | 800 Phillips Road | Webster, NY 14580 USA</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">-----Original Message-----<br class="">From: pwg-announce <<a href="mailto:pwg-announce-bounces@pwg.org" class="">pwg-announce-bounces@pwg.org</a>> On Behalf Of Michael Sweet<br class="">Sent: Friday, February 1, 2019 12:36 PM<br class="">To: PWG Announcements <<a href="mailto:pwg-announce@pwg.org" class="">pwg-announce@pwg.org</a>><br class="">Subject: [PWG-Announce] PWG Last Call: IPP Authentication Methods (Ends February 28, 2019)</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">Hi,</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">[This PWG Last Call starts today, February 1, 2019, and ends Thursday, February 28, 2019 at 10pm US Pacific time.]</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">This is the formal announcement of the IPP Authentication Methods best practice docuemnt, located at:</div><div class=""> </div><div class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/qaTbCzp5G5IogBmDC4WiZo?domain=ftp.pwg.org" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippauth-20190116.pdf</a></div><div class=""> </div><div class="">The IPP WG has completed extensive review of the various revisions of this document and a workgroup last call.</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">The PWG Process/3.0 requires that a quorum of PWG members (30% or 7 members) must acknowledge a PWG Last Call (with or without comments), before any document can progress to PWG Formal Vote. This PWG Last Call is NOT a Formal Vote but it DOES require your review acknowledgment. The PWG Definition of the Standards Development Process Version 3.0 is located at:</div><div class=""> </div><div class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/yQaWCADo5oTA6o10f8STi9?domain=pwg.org" class="">https://www.pwg.org/chair/membership_docs/pwg-process30.pdf</a></div><div class=""> </div><div class=""> </div><div class="">HOW TO RESPOND</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">Send an email with *exactly* the following subject line format:</div><div class=""> </div><div class=""> Subject: <Company Name> has reviewed the IPP Authentication Methods and has [no] comments</div><div class=""> </div><div class=""> </div><div class="">WHERE TO SEND YOUR RESPONSE</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">Please do NOT simply reply to this note on the PWG-Announce list.</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">Please send your response to *all* of the following email addresses:</div><div class=""> </div><div class=""> ipp at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://pwg.org/" class="">pwg.org</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(IPP WG mailing list - you must be subscribed!);</div><div class=""> smith.kennedy at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://hp.com/" class="">hp.com</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(Smith Kennedy, PWG Chair, IPP Authentication Methods editor)</div><div class=""> blueroofmusic at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://gmail.com/" class="">gmail.com</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(Ira McDonald, PWG Secretary, IPP WG Co-Chair)</div><div class=""> ptykod at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://tykodi.com/" class="">tykodi.com</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(Paul Tykodi, IPP WG Co-Chair)</div><div class=""> msweet at<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><a href="http://apple.com/" class="">apple.com</a><span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span>(Mike Sweet, IPP WG Secretary)</div><div class=""> </div><div class="">Note: You must be subscribed to the IPP WG mailing list to send email to that list - otherwise your email will be silently discarded. 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