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<html><head><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=us-ascii"></head><body style="word-wrap: break-word; -webkit-nbsp-mode: space; line-break: after-white-space;" class="">I like it!<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Unless there are any other suggestions, I'm going to run with that, and post an updated document later this morning.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class="">
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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Jul 1, 2019, at 6:49 PM, Michael Sweet <<a href="mailto:msweet@msweet.org" class="">msweet@msweet.org</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><span style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; float: none; display: inline !important;" class="">Smith,</span><div class="" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;"><br class=""></div><div class="" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;">Quick feedback:</div><div class="" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;"><br class=""></div><div class="" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;">- End initial sentence with "are to:" (add "to")?</div><div class="" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;">- Item 1: "currently defined for IPP" is awkward<br class=""><div class="">- Add "and" at the end of item 1.</div><div class="">- Item 2: "Describe implementation considerations for authentication ..." (identification has already happened, you are describing the items that were identified during the development of the document)</div><div class="">- Item 2: "protocol technical concerns" should read "technical protocol concerns"</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">That would make it:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div></div><blockquote class="" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none; margin: 0px 0px 0px 40px; border: none; padding: 0px;"><div class=""><div class="">3.5 Design Requirements</div></div><div class=""><div class=""><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><div class="">The design requirements for this IPP Authentication Methods Best Practice document are to:</div></div><div class=""><div class=""><br class=""></div></div><div class=""><div class="">1. Illustrate how each authentication method integrates into IPP interaction flows; and</div></div><div class=""><div class="">2. Describe implementation considerations for authentication in general, including factors that influence user experience and technical protocol concerns.</div></div></blockquote><div class="" style="caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;"><div class=""><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class="">On Jul 1, 2019, at 3:20 PM, Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) via ipp <<a href="mailto:ipp@pwg.org" class="">ipp@pwg.org</a>> wrote:<br class=""><br class="">Greetings,<br class=""><br class="">From our LCRC review of IPP Authentication Methods, it was pointed out in the review that the document was lacking a "Design Requirements" subsection to section 3. We decided to post a draft here on the reflector, and once consensus was reached, to add that to the final draft to be used in the PWG Formal Vote of Approval.<br class=""><br class=""><br class="">3.5 Design Requirements<br class=""><br class="">The design requirements for this IPP Authentication Methods Best Practice document are:<br class=""><br class="">1. Illustrate how each authentication method currently defined for IPP integrates into IPP interaction flows;<br class="">2. Identify and describe points to be considered in implementing Client or Printer support for authentication in general, including factors that influence user experience as well as protocol technical concerns.<br class=""><br class=""><br class="">Thoughts?<br class=""><br class="">Smith<br class=""><br class="">/**<br class=""> Smith Kennedy<br class=""> HP Inc.<br class="">*/<br class=""><br class="">_______________________________________________<br class="">ipp mailing list<br class=""><a href="mailto:ipp@pwg.org" class="">ipp@pwg.org</a><br class=""><a href="https://protect-us.mimecast.com/s/NaEyCmZ6o6hjkD2Y5HGAJTC?domain=pwg.org" class="">https://www.pwg.org/mailman/listinfo/ipp</a><br class=""></blockquote><br class=""><div class="">________________________<br class="">Michael Sweet</div></div></div></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></body></html>