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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Sep 12, 2019, at 2:35 AM, Cihan Colakoglu <<a href="mailto:Cihan.Colakoglu@dda.kyocera.com" class="">Cihan.Colakoglu@dda.kyocera.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><div class="WordSection1" style="page: WordSection1; caret-color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Helvetica; font-size: 14px; font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; letter-spacing: normal; text-align: start; text-indent: 0px; text-transform: none; white-space: normal; word-spacing: 0px; -webkit-text-stroke-width: 0px; text-decoration: none;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Hello All,<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">I have editorial comments on IPP System Service v1.0 :<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Page 177 – 182: Formatting of Section “<b class="">18. Change History</b>” Is messed up at multiple places.<span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span><br class="">It is messed up at the source (Word Document) and carried over to the PDF version.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Symbol; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""><span class="">·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: "Times New Roman";" class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Line 4928 – 4963 : Larger font and larger line spacing compared to the rest of “Change History”<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Symbol; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""><span class="">·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: "Times New Roman";" class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Line 5007 – 5009 : Line 5007 got broken into 3 lines (5007, 5008, 5009 should be 1 line)<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Symbol; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""><span class="">·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: "Times New Roman";" class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Line 5068 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: red;" class="">14 February 2018</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">” should be “<b class="">February 14, 2018</b>”<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Symbol; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""><span class="">·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: "Times New Roman";" class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Line 5081 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: red;" class="">12 January 2018</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">” should be “<b class="">January 12, 2018</b>”<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Symbol; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""><span class="">·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: "Times New Roman";" class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Line 5088 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: red;" class="">17 November 2017</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">” should be “<b class="">November 17, 2017</b>”<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Symbol; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""><span class="">·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: "Times New Roman";" class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Line 5102 : Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: red;" class="">13 November 2017</span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">” should be “<b class="">November 13, 2017</b>”<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt 0.5in; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif; text-indent: -0.25in;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Symbol; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""><span class="">·<span style="font-style: normal; font-variant-caps: normal; font-weight: normal; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 7pt; line-height: normal; font-family: "Times New Roman";" class=""> <span class="Apple-converted-space"> </span></span></span></span><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Line 5103 – 5122 : Bulleting, indentation and word spacing got messed up.<o:p class=""></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class=""><o:p class=""> </o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 12pt; font-size: 12pt; font-family: "Times New Roman", serif;"><span style="font-size: 11pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(31, 73, 125);" class="">Best Regards,<br class="">Cihan Colakoglu<br class="">Kyocera Document Solutions</span></p></div></div></blockquote></div><br class=""></div></body></html>