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<div><br class=""><blockquote type="cite" class=""><div class="">On Aug 26, 2020, at 7:36 AM, Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br class="Apple-interchange-newline"><div class=""><meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=utf-8" class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class="">Hi Smith,</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Text of URIs is correct, but the links (check the blue) are mostly wrong.</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Cheers,</div><div class="">- Ira</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><div class=""><div dir="ltr" class=""><i class=""><font size="1" class="">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)<br class="">Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG</font></i></div><div class=""><i class=""><font size="1" class="">Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG<br class=""></font></i></div><div dir="ltr" class=""><i class=""><font size="1" class="">Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br class="">Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br class="">Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br class="">IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br class="">Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br class=""><a style="color:rgb(51,51,255)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic" target="_blank" class="">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</a><br class=""><a style="color:rgb(102,0,204)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc" target="_blank" class="">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</a><br class="">mailto: <a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank" class="">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br class="">(permanent) PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434</font></i></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br class=""></div></div><br class=""><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Wed, Aug 26, 2020 at 9:29 AM Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards) via ipp <<a href="mailto:ipp@pwg.org" class="">ipp@pwg.org</a>> wrote:<br class=""></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;" class="">Greetings,<div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Following the review at the recent F2F of the IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 draft posted August 15, 2020, which revealed some critical flaws, I have I believe corrected those flaws and posted a new draft, available here:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><blockquote style="margin:0px 0px 0px 40px;border:medium none;padding:0px" class=""><div class=""><div class=""><div class=""><span style="" class=""><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/</a></span>wd-ippepx20-20200826.docx</div><div class=""><span style="" class=""><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/</a></span>wd-ippepx20-20200826.pdf</div></div><div class=""><span style="" class=""><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/</a></span>wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.docx</div></div><div class=""><div class=""><span style="" class=""><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/</a></span>wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.pdf</div></div><div class=""><div class=""><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.docx" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.docx</a></div><div class=""><span style="" class=""><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/" target="_blank" class="">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/</a></span>wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.pdf</div><div class=""></div></div></blockquote><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">I have included two "-rev" versions: the "-rev" are comparing this latest draft with the last fully reviewed draft published June 30, and the "-rev-20200815" are comparing this latest draft with the most recent August 15 draft. Here is a list of changes:</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">August 26, 2020:<br class=""><ul class=""><li class="">Changed wording at the start of each subsection of section 4 describing a conceptual feature, because the wording in the previous draft was inappropriate given the PWG model and its actors capable of activity;</li><li class="">Restored the definition of "job-password" and removed the added Job Status definitions of "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" because the internal Printer / Job values are not to be defined as "hidden Job Status attributes";</li><li class="">Changed all uses of the word "deprecated" to "DEPRECATED" other than those uses in the IANA Considerations section;</li><li class="">Fixed the IANA Considerations to reflect the state of the rest of the document; and</li><li class="">Restructured and updated the definition of "proof-copies".</li></ul><br class="">August 15, 2020:<br class=""><ul class=""><li class="">Renamed and simplified the "proof-and-hold" collection to become "proof-copies" (integer(1:MAX));</li><li class="">Refactored sections 4.4 and 4.5 to now be sub-sections of a new 4.4 "Proof Printing". Also renamed "Proof and Hold" to be "Job Proof and Suspend" and restored "Job Proof Print" as the feature name from the original 5100.11-2010.</li><li class="">Removed the "Feature Interoperability" sub-section of section 4 and instead distributed the points to other relevant areas of the document;</li><li class="">Updated language for "parent-job-id" and "parent-job-uuid" as per minutes. Also added a new subsection in section 7 to state that a Printer implementing the Resubmit-Job operation is required to add these attributes to the new copy of the Job;</li><li class="">Moved the tables listing the standard keywords to the section defining the Job Template attribute or operation attribute, not the Printer Description attribute ("xxx-supported") and added a note in the new PWG document style policy draft;</li><li class="">Added definitions for Control Console and End User and simplified the definition of Password Release Job;</li><li class="">Clarified and expanded the definition of the Job Release feature;</li><li class="">Extensively rewrote the definition of the Job Storage feature;</li><li class="">Added minor clarifications to the Get-User-Printer-Attributes operation definition;</li><li class="">Moved the portions of the "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" definitions concerning printer processing to new Job Status attribute definitions, since that is really where such discussion belongs;</li><li class="">Clarified the definition of the "job-cancel-after" attribute;</li><li class="">Fixed the table formatting for the "job-password-encryption-supported" keyword listing;</li><li class="">Updated keywords for "ipp-features-supported" to specify keywords for all conceptual features defined in this draft;</li><li class="">Updated Conformance Requirements and IANA Considerations; and</li><li class="">Fixed many instances of passive voice and other issues once the grammar checker had additional checking criteria enabled.</li></ul></div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Thanks to all for your patience and assistance in helping to review this important specification!</div><div class=""><br class=""></div><div class="">Cheers,<br class=""><div class="">Smith<br class=""><br class="">/**<br class=""> Smith Kennedy<br class=""> HP Inc.<br class="">*/</div><br class=""></div></div>_______________________________________________<br class="">
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