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<div dir="ltr"><div>Hi Smith,</div><div><br></div><div>Thanks for uploading the correct clean draft to the FTP site.<br></div><div><br></div><div>Attached is your latest "-rev" MS Word version with all of the necessary IETF RFC references added <br></div><div>(or corrected) and the US NIST FIPS references added. I also added a few informative MS Word</div><div>comments for your use (please read them). I updated the Normative and Informative References</div><div>sections accordingly.</div><div><br></div><div>Cheers,</div><div>- Ira</div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><div><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_signature" data-smartmail="gmail_signature"><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><div><div dir="ltr"><i><font size="1">Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)</font></i></div><div><i><font size="1">Chair - SAE Trust Anchors and Authentication TF<br></font></i></div><div dir="ltr"><i><font size="1">Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG</font></i></div><div><i><font size="1">Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG<br></font></i></div><div dir="ltr"><i><font size="1">Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG<br>Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group<br>Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG<br>IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB<br>Blue Roof Music / High North Inc<br><a style="color:rgb(51,51,255)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/blueroofmusic</a><br><a style="color:rgb(102,0,204)" href="http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc" target="_blank">http://sites.google.com/site/highnorthinc</a><br>mailto: <a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a><br>(permanent) PO Box 221 Grand Marais, MI 49839 906-494-2434</font></i></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div></div><br></div></div><br><div class="gmail_quote"><div dir="ltr" class="gmail_attr">On Mon, Dec 21, 2020 at 12:19 PM Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards) <<a href="mailto:smith.kennedy@hp.com">smith.kennedy@hp.com</a>> wrote:<br></div><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div style="overflow-wrap: break-word;">Hi Ira,<br>
<div><br><blockquote type="cite"><div>On Dec 21, 2020, at 9:31 AM, Ira McDonald <<a href="mailto:blueroofmusic@gmail.com" target="_blank">blueroofmusic@gmail.com</a>> wrote:</div><br><div><div dir="ltr"><div>I downloaded the MS Word source "wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" just now. My</div><div>copy of MS Word 2019 cannot open it - says it contains "unreadable" content and</div><div>suggests a recovery attempt - I didn't try it. <br></div><div><br></div><div>OTOH, the MS Word source "wd-ippepx20-20201029-rev.docx" does open OK</div><div>without warnings.</div><div><br></div><div>I'm not sure what version of MS Word you're using or what OS platform. But the</div><div>source of the eventual published version needs to be stable and readable for</div><div>future maintenance.</div></div></div></blockquote><br></div><div>My local copy opens without complain on both macOS and Windows 10, but the one on the FTP site is broken. I am not sure why the upload got messed up but the SHA256 hashes of my local copy of "wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" and the one on the FTP site don't match. I just pushed up a new copy and it loads as expected - try again:</div><div><br></div><div><a href="https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx" target="_blank">https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20201029.docx</a></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><br></div></blockquote></div>