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<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'> I have
posted the current MFD Overall draft at:<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><a
href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdoverallmod10-20091201.pdf">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdoverallmod10-20091201.pdf</a>
and <a href="ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdoverallmod10-20091201.docx">ftp://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/mfd/wd/wd-mfdoverallmod10-20091201.docx</a><o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>This should deal
with almost all of the issues brought up in October. I have noted most of these
changes (other than purely editorial) with highlighting. I have also added a
few comments, which are actually questions to be addressed.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>For whatever reason,
MS Word is really having problems with this document, inconsistently updating
figure and table references and locking up at least one a session… maybe
my program is corrupted. Updating cross references manually is prone to error
(and attention fatigue.) I am putting off putting in references until the text
is basically stable (which will be soon I hope.)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Note that it
was agreed to put the “Rationale” in a separate overall document. I
will post a first cut (and sparse) draft of that tomorrow morning. I think it
important that this be properly considered and “real”, not just some
words to nominally satisfy something in the PWG Process document. I really need
help with this. <o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>1.<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span
style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>What do we intend in the Service Descriptions?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>2.<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span
style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Why are we doing this? That is, what are
the scenarios that show the need for the information in these documents? (This
will imply a way in which this information will be used.)<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoListParagraph style='text-indent:-.25in;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1'><![if !supportLists]><span
style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><span style='mso-list:Ignore'>3.<span
style='font:7.0pt "Times New Roman"'> </span></span></span><![endif]><span
style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>What are the requirements that must be
addressed in the Service Descriptions (and associated documents)?<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>I think that we
all had some notion of these things when we started, although they may not have
been the same. It is unclear whether, as this activity has progressed, these
ideas have solidified, become more consistent or perhaps have become confused
in details and mechanics and have dissipated. This is a good opportunity for a
re-look, with either resulting affirmation or modification.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Thanks,<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'><o:p> </o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt;color:#1F497D'>Bill Wagner<o:p></o:p></span></p>
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