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<div><font size="2" face="Arial">Line 40, Title contains the word "Network" here but
nowhere else.<br>Line 180, FaxOutServices (grammar error)<br>Line 197, A FaxOut
Instruction Sheet is mentioned here, but don't see where it's defined or
described anywhere.<br>Line 218, What's the That at the first of the sentence in
this line. (PWG5108.01)?<br>Line 235, Discusses a clear need to define a web
services binding into a Web Service Schema.....but that's not what is in the
docoment.<br>Line 268, Broken reference<br>Line 321, MUST NOT begins a sentence
(what must not be copied)<br>Line 362, spacing between section 8.3 reference and
the word "for"<br>Line 370, need period at the end of the sentence.<br>Line 380,
Reference to the figure should be by figure number not position. (fix multiple
occurrences)<br>Line 427,428 remove extra lines (remove blank lines throughout
documents between text blocks and/or figures)<br>Line 519, Need line spacing
between unordered list and next paragraph<br>Line 599, Table 2 and Table 3 have
multiple occurrences of non-itallic/non-bold parameters (required are bold and
optional are
itallic)<br>
ElementsNaturalLanguage (multiple times)<br>Line 610, reference to model and
semantics document is incorrectly named<br>Line 643, not sure how you mandate
"durably" logged without any discussion or recommendation on what that means.
suggest just saying must be logged.<br>Line 635,636,626,624,
555,556,225,228,331,347,314,.....all extra, unne<span class="796330420-08062011">e</span>ded lines.<br></font></div>
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<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"><strong><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica; FONT-SIZE: 10pt"><font face="Tahoma">Jerry
Thrasher</font></span></strong><b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica; FONT-SIZE: 10pt"><br></span></b><span style="FONT-FAMILY: Helvetica; FONT-SIZE: 10pt"><font face="Tahoma">Senior
Engineer, WW Corporate Standards<br>Lexmark International Inc<span class="GramE">.</span><br>C14/082-1, 740 New Circle Rd,
Lexington <span class="SpellE">Ky</span> 40550<br>Office: +1 859 825
4056 Fax: +1 859 232 7628<br>thrasher(at)<span class="SpellE">lexmark</span>(dot)com</font></span></p></div>
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