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</o:shapelayout></xml><![endif]--></head><body lang=EN-US link=blue vlink=purple><div class=WordSection1><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Minor editorial comments:<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Table 3 – meaning of “implicit” is unclear<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line 707 – Information should be initial caps. Also should appendix be labeled Normative?<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:12.0pt;font-family:"Arial","sans-serif"'>Line 708 – space after Table 4<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=Default>Table 4 – some field values have unfortunate break (e.g. entries under DocumentDigitalSignatureSupplied, JobHoldUntilTime). Also, it would be better to avoid page breaks splitting up element properties<o:p></o:p></p><p class=Default>Table 4 – Units element name is not bold<o:p></o:p></p><p class=Default>Line 731 - Should appendix be labeled Normative?<o:p></o:p></p><p class=Default>Section 16 – Although the necessary information in provided between Section 15 and 16, and it is understood that capabilities elements mirror job ticket elements except for syntax, it is a little disconcerting to see Print Service Capabilities as just a listing of data types. I would suggest section 16 be ordered by element, giving the different syntax and perhaps constrant. Full replication of the other fields from Section 15 probably would not be necessary. (I realize this would be time consuming and, if the consensus is that this is desirable, I would be willing to help create this alternate table)<o:p></o:p></p><p class=Default>Section 17 - should appendix be labeled Informative?<o:p></o:p></p><p class=Default>Line 769 - Should be new page, Appendix D (already have a Appendix C) and labeled Informative. Note subsequent appendixes need to be renumbered<o:p></o:p></p><p class=Default>Line 770 – space after “Table 7”<o:p></o:p></p><p class=Default>Line 777 - Should be Appendix E. It is confusing have two sections with the same title. Also, since <span style='font-size:11.5pt'>Print Service Capabilities is one of the subjects of the paper (although the title evades this by referring to associated capabilities, with the distinction unclear), why is this section not in the main body of the specification.<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=Default><span style='font-size:11.5pt'>Line 783 – is table 3 the intended reference? If so, might be better to repeat the table without the compliance information.</span><o:p></o:p></p><p class=Default><span style='font-size:11.5pt'>Line 791-794 excess lines<o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=Default><span style='font-size:11.5pt'>Line 860 – Suggest new page, correct appendix letter, informative?, <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><span style='font-size:14.0pt'><o:p> </o:p></span></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p><p class=MsoNormal><o:p> </o:p></p></div><br />--
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