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<font size=2 face="sans-serif">Hi Pete,</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">While reviewing PWG Raster Format spec,
I have two more comments for Print Job Ticket and Associated Capabilities:</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">1. The attribute name: "PWGRasterDocumentBackside"
in Table 3 (page 36), Table 4 (page 57), Table 6 (page 73) should be changed
to "PWGRasterDocumentSheetBack" for being consistent with the
Schema and PWG Raster Format spec. </font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">2. The document format "image/pwg-raster"
should be in DocumentFormatWKV. </font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Regards,</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Nancy</font>
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<p><font size=1 face="sans-serif">02/27/2012 12:44 PM</font>
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<div align=right><font size=1 face="sans-serif">To</font></div>
<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Peter.Zehler@xerox.com, </font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">mfd@pwg.org, cloud@pwg.org</font>
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<td><font size=1 face="sans-serif">Oki Data has reviewed the Print Job
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Hi Pete,</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">I have no further comments for the version
20120117 in addition to those posted already.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Here are the comments against the new
updated version (20120227) today:</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 373-376 - It's not clear "a
protocol" here is what protocol. Readers need to do a lot of
guessing here. It's any printing protocol? Or only a protocol for
cloud printing?</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 360 - Please also reference the
section number in RFC291 here - much easier for readers not familiar
with IPP to find.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 413 - Figure 7 caption still labels
this element as "InsertSheet Datatype". Same problem with
Figures 9 -12, and Figures 15, 17-23.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Line 521 - It's not clear "that
element" here means the PageRanges PrintJobTicket element or a vendor
extension that controls this feature. Please reword.</font>
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<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">Thanks,</font>
<br><font size=2 face="sans-serif">-Nancy<br>
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Nancy Chen<br>
Principal Engineer<br>
Solutions and Technology<br>
Services and Solution Business - US<br>
Oki Data<br>
2000 Bishops Gate Blvd.<br>
Mt. Laurel, NJ 08054<br>
Phone: (856)222-7006<br>
Email: Nancy.Chen@okidata.com</font>
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