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Hi Jerry,<br><br>Retitled for PWG Last Call quorum visibility.<br><br>Pasted your comments inline below to show in the WG mail archive.<br><br>Many thanks for your comments.<br><br>Cheers,<br>- Ira<br><br>------------------------------------------------------------<br>
<br><br>Power Model 26 Sept. 2010.<br><br>1. line 285...the sentence is incomplete/fragmented<br>2. line 342...the sentence is incomplete/fragmented<br>3. line 723...extra comma<br>4. line 781...this sentence implies (forever) that something will be registered with IANA<br>
suggest actually registering these values with IANA and updating the sentence<br>5. line 903...the sentence states that transitional power states can be requested....is this<br>true? wouldn't think you should be able to do that...only stable power states.<br>
6. line 1419....hone should be none<br>7. line 1483, 1484...need space between time and "am"<br><br><br>Power MIB 26 Sept. 2010.<br>1. line 366...need to make sure this link is updated to a stable location (currently not a note<br>
for this)<br>
<br><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Thu, Oct 28, 2010 at 11:34 AM, Jerry Thrasher <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:thrasher@lexmark.com">thrasher@lexmark.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin: 0pt 0pt 0pt 0.8ex; border-left: 1px solid rgb(204, 204, 204); padding-left: 1ex;">
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