[IPP] Kyocera Document Solutions has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments

[IPP] Kyocera Document Solutions has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments

Cihan Colakoglu Cihan.Colakoglu at dda.kyocera.com
Thu Sep 12 08:35:14 UTC 2019


Hello All,
I have editorial comments on IPP System Service v1.0 :
Page 177 - 182:  Formatting of Section "18. Change History" Is messed up at multiple places.
It is messed up at the source (Word Document) and carried over to the PDF version.

*         Line 4928 - 4963 :  Larger font and larger line spacing compared to the rest of "Change History"

*         Line 5007 - 5009 :  Line 5007 got broken into 3 lines (5007, 5008, 5009 should be 1 line)

*         Line 5068 :  Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest "14 February 2018" should be "February 14, 2018"

*         Line 5081 :  Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest "12 January 2018" should be "January 12, 2018"

*         Line 5088 :  Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest "17 November 2017" should be "November 17, 2017"

*         Line 5102 :  Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest "13 November 2017" should be "November 13, 2017"

*         Line 5103 - 5122 :  Bulleting, indentation and word spacing got messed up.

Best Regards,
Cihan Colakoglu
Kyocera Document Solutions


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