[IPP] Kyocera Document Solutions has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments

[IPP] Kyocera Document Solutions has reviewed the IPP System Service v1.0 and has comments

Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & Standards Architect) smith.kennedy at hp.com
Thu Sep 12 14:45:35 UTC 2019


Thank you for your help, Cihan!

Smith

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    Smith Kennedy
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> On Sep 12, 2019, at 2:35 AM, Cihan Colakoglu <Cihan.Colakoglu at dda.kyocera.com> wrote:
> 
> Hello All,
> 
> I have editorial comments on IPP System Service v1.0 :
> 
> Page 177 – 182:  Formatting of Section “18. Change History” Is messed up at multiple places.
> It is messed up at the source (Word Document) and carried over to the PDF version.
> 
> ·         Line 4928 – 4963 :  Larger font and larger line spacing compared to the rest of “Change History”
> 
> ·         Line 5007 – 5009 :  Line 5007 got broken into 3 lines (5007, 5008, 5009 should be 1 line)
> 
> ·         Line 5068 :  Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “14 February 2018” should be “February 14, 2018”
> 
> ·         Line 5081 :  Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “12 January 2018” should be “January 12, 2018”
> 
> ·         Line 5088 :  Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “17 November 2017” should be “November 17, 2017”
> 
> ·         Line 5102 :  Inconsistent Date Format compared to the rest “13 November 2017” should be “November 13, 2017”
> 
> ·         Line 5103 – 5122 :  Bulleting, indentation and word spacing got messed up.
> 
> 
> 
> Best Regards,
> Cihan Colakoglu
> Kyocera Document Solutions
> 

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