XP> Accepted Editorial Changes

XP> Accepted Editorial Changes

don at lexmark.com don at lexmark.com
Tue Jan 14 10:13:20 EST 2003


I believe the following from Jun Fujisawa are editorial changes and
corrections that we can accept without discussion:

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From: http://www.pwg.org/hypermail/xp/0161.html

It is noted in the Status of this Document that all sections of this
document are normative unless otherwise noted. For this to work
as intended, I think we need the following changes:

1. "Introduction" should be noted as informative.
5. Acknowledgements" should be noted as informative.
C. XHTML-Print DTD and Modules" should not have note.

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From: http://www.pwg.org/hypermail/xp/0163.html

The first paragraph of section 2.3.1 refers to "XHTML Family user Agent
Conformance", where "user" should be capitalized.

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From: http://www.pwg.org/hypermail/xp/0165.html

The following section numbers in the Table of Contents don't end
with period, while other sections do.

3.1 - 3.16
4.5
A.1 - A.3
B.1 - B.3

The actual section titles also have similar inconsistency."

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From: http://www.pwg.org/hypermail/xp/0167.html

In 3.14 Link Module, "than the hreflang attribute must be supported"
should be "then the hreflang attribute must be supported."

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If anyone disagrees, please send a note explaining why these are not editorial to the mailing list.

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