Try as I might, I could not find anything serious in the latest
document. I did find the following nits:
1. The numbered entries (2) on page 28 do not have a space between
the period and the first character of the text.
2. The format of the "On-Line" entry on page 37 has the spacing
from the left margin different from the other entries.
3. The Input Measurement Diagram has the same problem as I reported
with the Output Measurement Diagram. (I am sure that you are
aware of this, but just in case.)
4. The definitions in appendix A should begin with a capital letter
and end with a period. Example:
"Alert - a reportable ...<snip>... entry in the alert table"
"Alert - A reportable ...<snip>... entry in the alert table."
All except #3 are really nits, but should be very easy to fix.