PMP Mail Archive: PMP> Editorial Comments on Latest Draft

PMP Mail Archive: PMP> Editorial Comments on Latest Draft

PMP> Editorial Comments on Latest Draft

Ron Bergman (rbergma@dpc.com)
Mon, 21 Jul 1997 09:54:35 -0700 (PDT)

Randy,

Try as I might, I could not find anything serious in the latest
document. I did find the following nits:

1. The numbered entries (2) on page 28 do not have a space between
the period and the first character of the text.

2. The format of the "On-Line" entry on page 37 has the spacing
from the left margin different from the other entries.

3. The Input Measurement Diagram has the same problem as I reported
with the Output Measurement Diagram. (I am sure that you are
aware of this, but just in case.)

4. The definitions in appendix A should begin with a capital letter
and end with a period. Example:

"Alert - a reportable ...<snip>... entry in the alert table"

should be:

"Alert - A reportable ...<snip>... entry in the alert table."

All except #3 are really nits, but should be very easy to fix.

Ron Bergman
Dataproducts Corp.