The document looks good. Here are some corrections:
page 8: Change your correction to have more parallel language, e.g.:
This can be done as follows:
- the end-user selects the correct printer driver
- the printer automatically selects the proper interpreter
- the end-user uses some other manual procedure
page 20: section 8.8
Shouldn't the response be labeled: "Print job rejected" It is not the
case that the synchronous response would say "print job accepted - printing
failed".
page 37: section 8.14.
I think we agreed that the last request "Here is last part of the document to
print" and response would be deleted and replaced with words saying that the job
resumed printing.