Editorial comments on the current draft (draft-ietf-printmib-mib-info-02.txt):
On page 18 of the current draft there is a definition for Busy /
Temporarily Unavailable which appears as part of the same paragraph
for the definition of Unavailable. I believe this should be removed
since there is a second definition for Busy on page 19. I thought we
had agreed to this previously.
The table on page 19 has 'Normal' as the first entry. I thought we had
agreed to change the first entry from 'Normal' to 'Idle'. There is no
definition for 'Normal' but there IS a definition for 'Idle'.
There are many instances of text formatting problems (line wraps and
indentations) in the draft.
Angelo