Hi Smith,
Text of URIs is correct, but the links (check the blue) are mostly wrong.
Cheers,
- Ira
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On Wed, Aug 26, 2020 at 9:29 AM Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards)
via ipp <ipp at pwg.org> wrote:
> Greetings,
>> Following the review at the recent F2F of the IPP Enterprise Printing
> Extensions v2.0 draft posted August 15, 2020, which revealed some critical
> flaws, I have I believe corrected those flaws and posted a new draft,
> available here:
>>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826.docx>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826.pdf>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.docx>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.pdf>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.docx>https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.pdf>>> I have included two "-rev" versions: the "-rev" are comparing this latest
> draft with the last fully reviewed draft published June 30, and the
> "-rev-20200815" are comparing this latest draft with the most recent August
> 15 draft. Here is a list of changes:
>> August 26, 2020:
>> - Changed wording at the start of each subsection of section 4
> describing a conceptual feature, because the wording in the previous draft
> was inappropriate given the PWG model and its actors capable of activity;
> - Restored the definition of "job-password" and removed the added Job
> Status definitions of "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" because
> the internal Printer / Job values are not to be defined as "hidden Job
> Status attributes";
> - Changed all uses of the word "deprecated" to "DEPRECATED" other than
> those uses in the IANA Considerations section;
> - Fixed the IANA Considerations to reflect the state of the rest of
> the document; and
> - Restructured and updated the definition of "proof-copies".
>>> August 15, 2020:
>> - Renamed and simplified the "proof-and-hold" collection to become
> "proof-copies" (integer(1:MAX));
> - Refactored sections 4.4 and 4.5 to now be sub-sections of a new 4.4
> "Proof Printing". Also renamed "Proof and Hold" to be "Job Proof
> and Suspend" and restored "Job Proof Print" as the feature name from the
> original 5100.11-2010.
> - Removed the "Feature Interoperability" sub-section of section 4 and
> instead distributed the points to other relevant areas of the document;
> - Updated language for "parent-job-id" and "parent-job-uuid" as per
> minutes. Also added a new subsection in section 7 to state that a
> Printer implementing the Resubmit-Job operation is required to add these
> attributes to the new copy of the Job;
> - Moved the tables listing the standard keywords to the section
> defining the Job Template attribute or operation attribute, not the
> Printer Description attribute ("xxx-supported") and added a note in the new
> PWG document style policy draft;
> - Added definitions for Control Console and End User and simplified
> the definition of Password Release Job;
> - Clarified and expanded the definition of the Job Release feature;
> - Extensively rewrote the definition of the Job Storage feature;
> - Added minor clarifications to the Get-User-Printer-Attributes
> operation definition;
> - Moved the portions of the "job-password" and
> "job-password-encryption" definitions concerning printer processing to new
> Job Status attribute definitions, since that is really where such
> discussion belongs;
> - Clarified the definition of the "job-cancel-after" attribute;
> - Fixed the table formatting for the
> "job-password-encryption-supported" keyword listing;
> - Updated keywords for "ipp-features-supported" to specify keywords
> for all conceptual features defined in this draft;
> - Updated Conformance Requirements and IANA Considerations; and
> - Fixed many instances of passive voice and other issues once the
> grammar checker had additional checking criteria enabled.
>>> Thanks to all for your patience and assistance in helping to review this
> important specification!
>> Cheers,
> Smith
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