[IPP] Updated draft of IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 posted for review

[Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards)]

Oh well, I guess my mail client botched generating the links somehow. Here they are again:

https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826.docx>
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826.pdf>
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.docx>
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.pdf>
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.docx>
https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.pdf <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.pdf>

Smith

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    Smith Kennedy
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> On Aug 26, 2020, at 7:36 AM, Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic at gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Smith,
> 
> Text of URIs is correct, but the links (check the blue) are mostly wrong.
> 
> Cheers,
> - Ira
> 
> Ira McDonald (Musician / Software Architect)
> Co-Chair - TCG Trusted Mobility Solutions WG
> Co-Chair - TCG Metadata Access Protocol SG
> Chair - Linux Foundation Open Printing WG
> Secretary - IEEE-ISTO Printer Working Group
> Co-Chair - IEEE-ISTO PWG Internet Printing Protocol WG
> IETF Designated Expert - IPP & Printer MIB
> Blue Roof Music / High North Inc
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> 
> On Wed, Aug 26, 2020 at 9:29 AM Kennedy, Smith (Wireless & IPP Standards) via ipp <ipp at pwg.org <mailto:ipp at pwg.org>> wrote:
> Greetings,
> 
> Following the review at the recent F2F of the IPP Enterprise Printing Extensions v2.0 draft posted August 15, 2020, which revealed some critical flaws, I have I believe corrected those flaws and posted a new draft, available here:
> 
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/ <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd>wd-ippepx20-20200826.docx
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/ <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/>wd-ippepx20-20200826.pdf
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/ <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/>wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.docx
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/ <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/>wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev.pdf
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.docx <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.docx>
> https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/ <https://ftp.pwg.org/pub/pwg/ipp/wd/>wd-ippepx20-20200826-rev-20200815.pdf
> 
> I have included two "-rev" versions: the "-rev" are comparing this latest draft with the last fully reviewed draft published June 30, and the "-rev-20200815" are comparing this latest draft with the most recent August 15 draft. Here is a list of changes:
> 
> August 26, 2020:
> Changed wording at the start of each subsection of section 4 describing a conceptual feature, because the wording in the previous draft was inappropriate given the PWG model and its actors capable of activity;
> Restored the definition of "job-password" and removed the added Job Status definitions of "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" because the internal Printer / Job values are not to be defined as "hidden Job Status attributes";
> Changed all uses of the word "deprecated" to "DEPRECATED" other than those uses in the IANA Considerations section;
> Fixed the IANA Considerations to reflect the state of the rest of the document; and
> Restructured and updated the definition of "proof-copies".
> 
> August 15, 2020:
> Renamed and simplified the "proof-and-hold" collection to become "proof-copies" (integer(1:MAX));
> Refactored sections 4.4 and 4.5 to now be sub-sections of a new 4.4 "Proof Printing". Also renamed "Proof and Hold" to be "Job Proof and Suspend" and restored "Job Proof Print" as the feature name from the original 5100.11-2010.
> Removed the "Feature Interoperability" sub-section of section 4 and instead distributed the points to other relevant areas of the document;
> Updated language for "parent-job-id" and "parent-job-uuid" as per minutes. Also added a new subsection in section 7 to state that a Printer implementing the Resubmit-Job operation is required to add these attributes to the new copy of the Job;
> Moved the tables listing the standard keywords to the section defining the Job Template attribute or operation attribute, not the Printer Description attribute ("xxx-supported") and added a note in the new PWG document style policy draft;
> Added definitions for Control Console and End User and simplified the definition of Password Release Job;
> Clarified and expanded the definition of the Job Release feature;
> Extensively rewrote the definition of the Job Storage feature;
> Added minor clarifications to the Get-User-Printer-Attributes operation definition;
> Moved the portions of the "job-password" and "job-password-encryption" definitions concerning printer processing to new Job Status attribute definitions, since that is really where such discussion belongs;
> Clarified the definition of the "job-cancel-after" attribute;
> Fixed the table formatting for the "job-password-encryption-supported" keyword listing;
> Updated keywords for "ipp-features-supported" to specify keywords for all conceptual features defined in this draft;
> Updated Conformance Requirements and IANA Considerations; and
> Fixed many instances of passive voice and other issues once the grammar checker had additional checking criteria enabled.
> 
> Thanks to all for  your patience and assistance in helping to review this important specification!
> 
> Cheers,
> Smith
> 
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