My comments:
PZ01 - Line:264 - Remove the line marked 4 from the diagram. The client
does not ask the Template Manager Service for a new/empty template. The
new template is created based on the Job Ticket schema.
PZ02 - Line 272 - delete (see PZ01)
PZ03 - Line 273 delete (see PZ04)
PZ04 - Line 274 change to "The remote Scan Client requests, from the
user's specified Scan Service (scanner), the associated description
attribute and the range of values for each element."
PZ05 - Line 282 change to "The Template Manager Service stores the
configured Scan Job Template in its Job Template Repository (local or
remote).
PZ06 - renumber diagram and processing flow.
PZ07 - Line 291-292 - delete (See PZ01)
PZ08 - Line 333 - change to "From the Local Scan Client the end user
requests a list of templates"
PZ09 - Line 378 - change "supportedand" to "supported and"
PZ10 - Comment - We know when a Digital Document is created. Does the
model contain any attributes that control the deletion of the Digital
Document? I assume if we do add this feature it would only apply to
Digital Documents store internal to the MFD and accessible only via the
Scan Service.
PZ11 - Line 550 - This should be Pause instead of disable. We want to
temporarily interrupt the processing of scan jobs not the acceptance of
new scan jobs into the queue
PZ12 - Comment - What is the difference between use case 6 and 7
PZ13 - Comment - I would like to update the model and operations based
on the existing WSDL/Schema with updates based on requirements from this
version of the document
Peter Zehler
XEROX
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