Hi Robert,
Attached is a marked-up version of your document. The mark-up contains
suggested changes, and questions or food for thought in the form of
comments. Many are trivial: simple typos, grammar, spelling and such. Many
are suggested wording changes that probably represent personal preference as
much as anything else; if it doesn't seem like an improvement to you, just
throw it in the bit-bucket. ;-)
There are a couple of substantive changes suggested, and if you disagree
with or have questions about those, they would probably merit some
discussion.
We have some other comments that we will propose for the XHTML-Print
appendix dealing with the application/vnd.pwg-multiplexed content-type, as
they are specific to situations where the root message of content type
application/vnd.pwg-xhtml-print+xml.
Thanks!
Melinda Grant
-----Original Message-----
From: Robert Herriot [mailto:bob@herriot.com]
Sent: Thursday, January 31, 2002 2:35 PM
To: ipp@pwg.org; ifx@pwg.org
Subject: IPP> Latest version of application/vnd.pwg-multiplexed
The latest version of application/vnd.pwg-multiplexed (nee
application/multiplexed) is now available at:
http://search.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-herriot-application-multiplexed
-04.txt
<http://search.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-herriot-application-multiplexe
d-04.txt> .
This version makes many clarifications and changes its name. However, this
version doesn't change the representation.
I have requested that the rfc-editor publish it as an informational RFC.
Bob Herriot
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